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waht if gorndon freeman new the future in half lifethis is number 1 do not know how there are going to be i am working on number2 now so it will came in a week or 2
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ErinGamesdotcom Erin started gaming when her dad handed her a Commodore 64 and told her…
did u make this 6 years ago when u were 8 or are u just lining about your age to make your epenis look bigger
by the way you speled what,gordon and knew wrong
HOLY SHIT DOMONATED
Uhhhhh....holy distortion Batman!
He was screaming into the mic and how is this considered machinima NO editing he just recorded a 8 minute thing and put voice in it without stopping NOT A MACHINIMA
This reminds me of "Freeman's mind"
Oww, my ears...
I'll also "like it" since the idea was good anyway
I think the concept was there,but I can't take it seriously sorry :S
Try not to take it offensively,but I think a kids voice stuttering and high pitched isn't really great for trying to make this "comedy" come to life.
Still as I said it's a very original concept,what Gordon Freeman would be saying throughout and no one would take notice of him,but I'd reccomend using someone elses voice,or just adding text,text would be much better actually.
Also the phrasing of things was a bit overdramatic,keep the comedy lines subtle and simple.You tend to overstretch the dialogue and say more than needs to be said tbh.
Otherwise,it was pretty good I guess,if you want to add my email or something,you can send me the dialogue and I'll deepen it for you,and maybe take some things out that may not need to have been said.