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EDIT: Cut me some slack with the comments guys Im just an amateur with this...
This is my video for the contest!
'Peccavi' ( latin for: I have sinned )
An evil Eterial slays 2 bloodelves who had … more info
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- Added August 06, 2008
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so whats the concept?
i liked it :p it was fun to watch
Nice, but sorry mate i can beat it ;P
I think it's great! I like the story in combination with the music! Good choice
!!! Well done :)
So you have a well made video with some really good effects, but for me, that was about it. The story was to slow and I couldnt really make much sense of it. A good effort but it needs work
The Music was an excellent choice.
I saw the skeleton of the story there, but there was not much flesh. I would definatley make more if I were you. Don't be discouraged. You just need to get more in depth with the story you're telling.
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AAAH GIANT KID @ 1:35!!
L3PERSPECTIVE PLZ!
If you're using a video editor like Sony Vegas Pro 8 or Adobe Premiere, I know you can get a little more involved. I like it was short, but even with MY attention span like it is I lost track half way through. It was visually interesting, but not that involved. You still have plenty of time, if you create another video take your time. Personally, I would've found it more interesting if you used more backgrounds, or at least the same area but a different location in that area. If you did all the editing yourself, I know you have the artistic skills just take your time and create a story that will grab the audience and hold them making them want more.
I understand the story it just seemed like u didnt put much effort into it
didnt really make sense to me
Well... you used the same bagground alot of times (: i think it would be better just with black bagground, but else fine (: