EDIT: Cut me some slack with the comments guys Im just an amateur with this...
This is my video for the contest!
'Peccavi' ( latin for: I have sinned )
An evil Eterial slays 2 bloodelves who h… more info
EDIT: Cut me some slack with the comments guys Im just an amateur with this...
This is my video for the contest!
'Peccavi' ( latin for: I have sinned )
An evil Eterial slays 2 bloodelves who had crossed his path, upon death their childeren flee from this evil....
Years later, their hearts burn with desire to get their revenge and bring judgement upon the Eterial that stole their parents life....
Brother and Sister unite their magical powers combined with a burning desire for revenge, they create a magical atmosphere that kills the Eterial.
It took me some time to create this video and I'm very proud of it for this is one of my best video's so far!
I hope you will enjoy it as much as I do! :)
So you have a well made video with some really good effects, but for me, that was about it. The story was to slow and I couldnt really make much sense of it. A good effort but it needs work
I saw the skeleton of the story there, but there was not much flesh. I would definatley make more if I were you. Don't be discouraged. You just need to get more in depth with the story you're telling.
If you're using a video editor like Sony Vegas Pro 8 or Adobe Premiere, I know you can get a little more involved. I like it was short, but even with MY attention span like it is I lost track half way through. It was visually interesting, but not that involved. You still have plenty of time, if you create another video take your time. Personally, I would've found it more interesting if you used more backgrounds, or at least the same area but a different location in that area. If you did all the editing yourself, I know you have the artistic skills just take your time and create a story that will grab the audience and hold them making them want more.
so whats the concept?
i liked it :p it was fun to watch
Nice, but sorry mate i can beat it ;P
I think it's great! I like the story in combination with the music! Good choice
!!! Well done :)
So you have a well made video with some really good effects, but for me, that was about it. The story was to slow and I couldnt really make much sense of it. A good effort but it needs work
The Music was an excellent choice.
I saw the skeleton of the story there, but there was not much flesh. I would definatley make more if I were you. Don't be discouraged. You just need to get more in depth with the story you're telling.
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AAAH GIANT KID @ 1:35!!
L3PERSPECTIVE PLZ!
If you're using a video editor like Sony Vegas Pro 8 or Adobe Premiere, I know you can get a little more involved. I like it was short, but even with MY attention span like it is I lost track half way through. It was visually interesting, but not that involved. You still have plenty of time, if you create another video take your time. Personally, I would've found it more interesting if you used more backgrounds, or at least the same area but a different location in that area. If you did all the editing yourself, I know you have the artistic skills just take your time and create a story that will grab the audience and hold them making them want more.
I understand the story it just seemed like u didnt put much effort into it
didnt really make sense to me
Well... you used the same bagground alot of times (: i think it would be better just with black bagground, but else fine (: