O Wretched Man CoH Series

PoptartFairy Level 1 April 09, 2008

Absolutely brilliant. Very touching and accurate rendition of Wretch and Ghost Widow's history, heh.

There's only a couple of quibbles I can think of. One being that it wasn't hugely clear when a scene was in the past, and when a scene was in the present. The other slight complaint is that the dialogue you inserted wasn't, in my opinion, needed. You did a very striking job without text at all other times, so it seemed a little out of place.

Either way, well done! Can't wait to see what you'll be putting together next.

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Absolutely brilliant. Very touching and accurate rendition of Wretch and Ghost Widow's history, heh. There's only a couple of quibbles I can think of. One being that it wasn't hugely clear when a scene was in the past, and when a scene was in the present. The other slight complaint is that the dialogue you inserted wasn't, in my opinion, needed. You did a very striking job without text at all other times, so it seemed a little out of place. Either way, well done! Can't wait to see what you'll be putting together next.

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Energyone Level 42 April 08, 2008

Cool, although some of it I didn't completely understand.

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Cool, although some of it I didn't completely understand.

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