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My enter in the wegame contest, :)
Something-productions goes drama :P
The story takes place in Eastvale, where two powerful familys have decided to marry their children to gain maximum power over … more info
Katana I'm a choreographer; I make videos using Valve's Face Poser tool for the Source…
I liked it. I don't matter about the missing voices, it had good effects and not really that make mistakes, tho voices would be an good add.. And Moviemak3rz are maybe a bit right about the length.. You don't get to know the characters, only the story which is quiet familiar from other adventures and stories.
Yeah.... its alright. Would of been better if they accually talked...
Not too bad. Your going well, though as everyone says, better beginning and ending would be better.
Not too bad. Your going well, though as everyone says, better beginning and ending would be better.
Uh, normally my WoW machinima standards are quite high, but I'll close an eye for this one.
A nice short story, nothing that needs you to think while watching it. Maybe if you start using various emotes to make more "believable" stuff ,like instead of a /work emote, the character actually opens the wardrobe and takes the sword out (and yes it's possible, camera position, a lil' bit of Photoshop and the right emote sometimes make wonders), and find some voice actors, you'll be on a good way of making really good machinimas.
Good "easy to follow" story, but some voices would make it more believeable i suppose. Otherwise - thumbs up!
I liked it to. Your camera shots were very good and so was your fight sequence.
Like other have said, you need more of an opening and a better fleshed out ending.
Good job.
Great movie but...bah
Thats so messed up lol the guy who got cheated on gets murdured? lol :
I agree. It was a little short. Very basic plot. She has a choice and makes a decision. "the end" in it's placement was very anticlimactic and the closure that it provides would be better off after Brian thanks her with the rest as a lead into a sequel. Or just leave it out with the connotation of a sequel provided by a fade. Also the abrupt end to the music adds to the ill effect of the end.
The idea is generic but I'm still happy that someone did it to machinima. Leaving out voices added nicely to the drama and I really liked the special effects and shooting. This is definitely better than some of the other movies; I've only watched two or three others.
I liked it,but I felt it was too short,it all happened so quick I didn't get to feel for the characters enough by the end.My advice next time is to make it longer,and make longer dialogue scenes just to bring that more life and believeability to the characters,so I can feel even more sad towards the end and have a stronger connection.
I loved it though,great original story,the idea was nice and simple,I like how you described the background in the video description so when I started watching the movie I kind of just felt right at home from the start.
You're the first entrant I'm liking as far as I know,and I'd give you a 4/5 if there was a star rating system,I really enjoyed it,good music too,especially after she killed him.