The Lights from the abyss episode III

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amoor1995 The 1337 Level 35 1431 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	Hey Gaaasp I should REALLY throw the link and disappear because I've noticed too many mistakes and stuff.. But I didn't want my effort to go for nothing so...I made this about 2 weeks ago or something .. But I was too shy to announce it in WeGame.. Linking animations failed even though I used too many copies of the blood elf talk animation. My voice acting pretty much sucked... There were some stupid stuff here and there, never used shadows. Man this is weird.. But anyway just watch it and look for any other mistake I haven't noticed.. Now I seriously doubt my ability to complete this @.@ Specially with school holding me back big time @.@ Anyway here's the link , hope you don't explode while watching it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zG-u3rBiJ... OMIGAWSH IT'S AMOOR!
Farinar The Advisor Level 33 973 Posts Moderator 1 month ago Permalink Report	You've definately gotten better! I can be seen - the story is better written - you tried to get some characteristics on the characters which is a good thing. I also like the horde angle of the story. Now, an issue I'd like to adress. Please change backgrounds sometimes when the angle changes or a new character appears, else it gets really dull. Also, what's up with the lasershooting chicken? o.O Forum Moderator and Member.
Zamros The WeGamer Level 47 2704 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	My voice acting sucked in that one, next time I'll try and act a bit like a chav. Also, Sony Vegas kept cutting off the edges of your animation models. To solve this watch Sefearion's Tutorial Machinima 101 (You failed with the Krious typo btw :P) P.S. You have inspired me to finish the MadWorld trailer. :D Thanks for this beautiful siggy Blubo! =D
Dasbear The Philosopher Level 19 266 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	Actually wasn't real bad, rough, but not bad. Alot better than first one I ever attempted, lol, but we won't talk of that one. I agree probs with vegas do cut things when video's put in and such are at different scale than the video being made. I myself had had a devil of a time with getting things to match as that, maybe it is I who should read that thing on "machinima 101" lol
amoor1995 The 1337 Level 35 1431 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	Nice to see people not eating my face for that one :P And lol a giant chicken that shoots laser @.@ That was some randomness :D You don't want a boring randomless series do ya? And I think you didn't mention the flaws because I already did? OMIGAWSH IT'S AMOOR!
Zamros The WeGamer Level 47 2704 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	Yeah, the most obvious flaw was the models being cut off which you can see in Machinima 101. Another I saw was that alot of the animations weren't linked, to help solve this watch Sefearion's tutorial on Linking Animations. Thanks for this beautiful siggy Blubo! =D
Origano The Old Master Level 36 1042 Posts Moderator 1 month ago Permalink Report	Well well! I will not list here what you did wrong, but what you did right. Remove these from the list I posted here last time. -You removed the RPG-style battles! -You didn't screw up the voices Otherwise same problems apply. Biggest problem is the disappearing characters and same backgrounds. "look who I found!" pant pant bleed bleed" -Tamzin My Blog - http://origano-flyingcowstudios.blogspot...
Zamros The WeGamer Level 47 2704 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	I disagree Origano, the biggest problem was my voice acting. :P Thanks for this beautiful siggy Blubo! =D
Origano The Old Master Level 36 1042 Posts Moderator 1 month ago Permalink Report	Don't worry man. You are nowhere near my " top 20 worst VAs" ever. "look who I found!" pant pant bleed bleed" -Tamzin My Blog - http://origano-flyingcowstudios.blogspot...
amoor1995 The 1337 Level 35 1431 Posts 1 month ago Permalink Report	OMG you have a top 20 worst VA's list?! :O Anyways thanks :D I'll see what can I do in EP4 :P OMIGAWSH IT'S AMOOR!